Friday, December 19, 2014

The Secret Superhero


Written by Mikee Sophia Yao


Once upon a time, there was a very beautiful girl named Graziella. She was rich and very popular. Her family are secret superheroes who have mysterious powers. She grew very smart. At first, everyone loved her and many people dreamt to be with her and talk to her. That time she was the most popular kid in school. The boys in school all want to be her boyfriend. However, they don’t really know who she is. Her face and beauty is not common; it is like an angel that has fallen from the sky. She is really a very beautiful and gorgeous girl. People never saw a girl like that in school before Graziella came. Her family thought that they won’t have a child but then Graziella was born and they were really happy to have their first child. She was a total package because she has everything, like her smartness, beauty, and many more. Her parents spoiled her so much because she is their only child. They love her so much and they can’t even say no to her. She has everything; she is a very lucky child.


On the first paragraph I said that she was very popular, but now everything had changed. When she came to school everyone was looking at her, but she didn’t mind them. She was looking around, looking for her friends but she cannot find any of them. She had the guts to ask one of the mean girls and they said that they also didn’t see them since awhile ago. She knew that they got them. She remembered something; her friends told her that the mean girls were the new kidnappers in school because last time there was also a group of girls kidnapping people. She was scared, because she didn’t want anyone to hurt her friends except her. She had only one ambition in life, which is to become a superhero.

When her fake friends would listen about her ambition they would laugh and tease. She wanted to get angry but she couldn’t do anything as her friends were stronger than her. On that day, when the mean girls got her friends, she saw an old car waiting for something in front of the school; she didn’t know what they were doing there. She had a bad feeling about it but she just let it go and went inside the school and acted like nothing happened. When she got in, she heard the car door close; then they caught them and drove them to an unknown place. Later they learned that they were the mean girls/ the kidnappers.



Graziella called Erik and asked where he and her friends were and he told her that they had been kidnapped by the mean girls. So she immediately called the police and told the police what happened. The police started looking for the unknown place but they cannot find it. Graziella started thinking that if there would be a superhero, they could easily escape from them. Somehow the police got some information about the unknown place where they were kept.



When the kidnappers knew about this, they started to go to a new place. When they were not listening to the kidnappers’ words they got beaten up. Even though her friends tease her sometimes, Graziella still loved her friends. She always wants to protect her friends but she couldn’t because she’s not that strong. When they were getting released to a new place, Graziella punched one of the kidnappers face. The kidnapper had a weapon on her hand. Graziella took the weapon and she pointed it towards the kidnapper. Graziella told them to release her friends and to give them their phones; and they released all her friends. She suddenly got the confidence to fight with the kidnappers. She started fighting with them and the kidnappers were all on the floor. After that she called the police and told them where they were. The police came and arrested the kidnappers.



Later on, Graziella understood that confidence is the key to success. She understood that she doesn’t need to be a real superhero, she only needs confidence. She started to develop the confidence in her and started to fight for everything.



After that incident, everything went back to normal. Graziella and her friends were happy to see each other and bond together. Everyone was surprised and also thankful to Graziella gor what she had done to her friends. Before, they thought that Graziella was weak but she’s not. We shouldn’t judge people; we should know them first before judging them. Even though they are different from us, we should still love them.



Graziella’s family congratulated her for saving her friends and Graziella’s parents told her that they are superheroes and have super powers. Her parents told her that she doesn’t need to have to be one of them and to have a super power because for them she is already a superhero. Her friends’ mother and father thanked her for saving their children.





THE END.

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